This and that and forth and back
Wednesday, September 3rd, 2014 05:18 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Note to self: Don't solicit in-depth critique on a subtle and indirectly-told story you know has a reader-interpretation problem when you're supposed to be de-bracketing and reviewing a novel chapter.
Focus? What's that?
Focus? What's that?