Story-Seed Is Not A Story
Saturday, January 11th, 2025 07:21 pmCame across this whilst back-reading Pat Wrede blogs that I missed last year:
This may explain a lot about why some story ideas never take off for me, and why most how-to-develop-your-story advice bounces off me so hard. Because I will get story-seeds that are concepts, or world-building, or what-ifs, or even themes, and they may generate more of the same, but what they don't generate is characters. And I've long since figured out that while all that other stuff is important, if I don't have characters, I don't have a story.
(Also, that "under the surface, over geologic time periods" bit? I feel seen.)
Example: I have a title, "Love and Non-Transparency". The title was inspired by my cat placing herself between my eyes and my laptop screen, but what could it really be about? Obviously, it's a romance with a ghost, who becomes solid but still dead. This to me is a cool idea. I'd like to do something with it. As an experiment, I tried kicking it around with the housemate to try to develop it enough to write. There's a very dark direction it could go, but that seems too easy; I'd rather do something else with it, even though dark fantasy seems to have more markets these days. I got that the ghost is probably from the 1920s or '30s: Prohibition and pin-stripe suits, because that sounds like fun. But beyond that... the answer to far too many questions was “I don’t know; that’ll come with character, and I don’t have characters yet.” Trying to force-develop the characters stopped everything cold. I think somebody's name is Claire/Clare, but whether that's his last name or the first name of the living woman, (or the Matt Pond PA song to play while writing it), or someone else entirely, I've no idea.
And that makes sense, because I'm trying to force roses from this pumpkin. Perhaps at some point it'll mutate, but for now I guess I’ll just have to shove this one into the back-brain and hope someone materializes out of the mist to carry it back to me.
All stories start from some sort of seed: an idea (what if the moon exploded?), a character, a setting, a plot, a theme, an opening line, a closing line, etc. That seed needs to grow before it is ready to produce story-fruit. For some writers, the growth process is fast, methodical, and/or deliberate; for others it takes place mostly under the surface, over geologic time periods. However it goes, the first things the story-seed grows are usually related to the type of story-seed—an idea-based seed will sprout more ideas, a character-based seed will sprout more characters and/or their life stories, and so on.
This is normal. Trying to force a story-seed to grow in a different direction is like trying to make a just-sprouted pumpkin vine immediately produce rose flowers.
This may explain a lot about why some story ideas never take off for me, and why most how-to-develop-your-story advice bounces off me so hard. Because I will get story-seeds that are concepts, or world-building, or what-ifs, or even themes, and they may generate more of the same, but what they don't generate is characters. And I've long since figured out that while all that other stuff is important, if I don't have characters, I don't have a story.
(Also, that "under the surface, over geologic time periods" bit? I feel seen.)
Example: I have a title, "Love and Non-Transparency". The title was inspired by my cat placing herself between my eyes and my laptop screen, but what could it really be about? Obviously, it's a romance with a ghost, who becomes solid but still dead. This to me is a cool idea. I'd like to do something with it. As an experiment, I tried kicking it around with the housemate to try to develop it enough to write. There's a very dark direction it could go, but that seems too easy; I'd rather do something else with it, even though dark fantasy seems to have more markets these days. I got that the ghost is probably from the 1920s or '30s: Prohibition and pin-stripe suits, because that sounds like fun. But beyond that... the answer to far too many questions was “I don’t know; that’ll come with character, and I don’t have characters yet.” Trying to force-develop the characters stopped everything cold. I think somebody's name is Claire/Clare, but whether that's his last name or the first name of the living woman, (or the Matt Pond PA song to play while writing it), or someone else entirely, I've no idea.
And that makes sense, because I'm trying to force roses from this pumpkin. Perhaps at some point it'll mutate, but for now I guess I’ll just have to shove this one into the back-brain and hope someone materializes out of the mist to carry it back to me.