More coffeeshop fun

Had another go at writing at the coffeeshop on the way to the gym today. Managed to turn out about about 400 words in... an hour and a half? Something like that. Not too bad, by my standards. More importantly, I seem to have finished the revision from hell. Well, for definitions of "finished" that include a handful of find-a-better-phrase brackets, and having no idea whatsoever if the new version is even coherent, let alone "right". But all the gaps are filled in, at least.

The coffeeshop experiment remains inconclusive: On the one hand, getting out of my usual environment does seem to help with the sticky bits; on the other hand, while I'm pleased I'm developing the ability to write through interruptions, I could happily have fed a cup sideways to the two women who decided the otherwise-deserted back room was the perfect place for their whiny-voiced chat. Still, 400 words, not to be sneezed at.

Now to do the final tag scene... and the packet of tape flags' worth of minor tweaks, and whatever else the betas find....