Okay, I've gone through the annotations. Thank you for sending them; I love watching how other writers' brains work!
However, I fear I'm still stuck in the swamp. The annotations tell me what you did and often why, but not *how* you did it. (Also, they seem to be mostly about things I would define as character and setting/world-building, not plot.) Well, okay, you do say "how", in that it basically just popped into your head and you went with it. And sometimes that happens for me too! But when it doesn't, I stop dead. And *that's* what I need to fix.
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Date: 2020-Jul-29, Wednesday 03:36 am (UTC)However, I fear I'm still stuck in the swamp. The annotations tell me what you did and often why, but not *how* you did it. (Also, they seem to be mostly about things I would define as character and setting/world-building, not plot.) Well, okay, you do say "how", in that it basically just popped into your head and you went with it. And sometimes that happens for me too! But when it doesn't, I stop dead. And *that's* what I need to fix.